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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I think you did a great job with the play of sunlight - particularly with it pooling by her feet on the floor. The affect is very successful there and across the flesh tone on her legs and the walls - its very defined. But the problem I think is that while the light play is very solid and well defined, the coloring of the plants and her dress aren't the same. They're blobs of color versus very straight lines of light. Laser sunlight can make color bleed a bit but I think it bleeds here a little too much - it needs a little more strength in definition - like the dresser and the floor - which are solid enough to serve as contrast to the light. A bit more definition on the arm and hand along the book would be better, too.